Let’s play a game. I’ll give you a phrase and you complete it with the first thought that enters your mind. The first thought! I believe you if you say you did, we can all be comfortable with the honour system. Post your reply to your blog and link it here, that way it might spread. One phrase every Thursday.
Today’s phrase is….
“She held my hand in hers… ”
My reply,” to hand me a knife, blade inwards.”
Go!
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About hbhatnagar
I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then.
I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile!
A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit).
I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog.
I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly.
I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.
She held my hand in hers for a minute before putting it back in the jar.
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Now that’s a writer’s take on it! Thanks for playing along! π
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Reblogged this on mangosarenottheonlyfruit and commented:
….and begged me not to leave
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She held my hand in hers and with her gilded talons, etched in my palm a secret map to one thousand nights of dissipated terror.
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I can relate to that…..thanks for taking part! π
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And made me with her in a dim moon light
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Chalo, someone moved from the sunset into the moonlight! π
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And thanks for participating!
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and kissed him with her gaze.
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And she couldn’t let go….
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Ah! π
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And thanks for playing!
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Your welcome
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Never wanted to…
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And she never did, for he was in her heart forever,…even as he parted…..
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Even as he parted…
The essence of him still lingered on her hand that held his once.
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The memories of him starting into her teary-eyed, the scent of him, enclosed upon her, enveloped her entire being, yet she knew still the memory will imprint on her Soul forever…
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And that her love would never cease because soul never dies.
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Good replies all, but I wasn’t playing ‘spin the yarn’ (Did you play that at school too?) π
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Thank you!
But she was writing so beautifully that I couldn’t resist continuing it. I and her almost wrote a poetry. π
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The Soul retains all of our memories in this life and past, love included…
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And that’s how she continued to live with a love, destroyed and secluded.
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Not so much destroyed but damaged and broken, and shattered in pieces…
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Undestroyed*
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π
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What? No comment for me?
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Comments are for people I normally don’t say a lot to! π
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Oh! I feel special.
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You do? Now that makes me feel special. π
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Yes. We are special for each other. π
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and together they walked towards the sunset..
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Two walkers into the sunset. What have you against the sunrise? π
Thanks for playing! π
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π I don’t normally wake up at sunrise π
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Try it, it’s better than a sunset!
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…and we started walking towards the sunset.
π
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Two walkers into the sunset. π
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And thanks for participating! π
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You’re welcome π
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And looked into my sad eyes.
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Nice! That’s what I wanted to see, how we all interpret the same image..
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……..and led me down that forbidden path.
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Nice!
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a knife…? Cool idea. I have to think hard…
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Nah, you’re not supposed to think. That’s the beauty of it, write the first thing that came to mind when you read that phrase…. π
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And she stared at him with her lips pursed…
I did take some time to come up with something that more or less rhymes, as usual. π
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So did I, though it didn’t take time.
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& I fell in love.
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Nice. And thanks for participating. Please post it on your blog, if you’d wish to. π
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π
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