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Two phrase story #3

“The ringlets curled in the air….. ”

….. He burned his lungs once more.

Your turn!


About hbhatnagar

I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then. I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile! A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit). I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog. I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly. I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.


22 thoughts on “Two phrase story #3

  1. Wow ! Smoking redefined πŸ˜€

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Himali Shah | 24/07/2015, 6:43 PM
  2. (His blood ran cold as he watched her hair change shape with the slow determination of a sniper, with its prey caught in line of sight). The ringlets curled in the air, as did the behemoth that glared at him from her thousand yard stare.

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    Posted by Sabiscuit | 24/07/2015, 5:56 AM
    • The slow determination of a sniper…nice! Although you’re playing fast and loose with the rules missy! *wags finger*

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      Posted by hbhatnagar | 24/07/2015, 6:26 AM
      • I had to include the previous phrase so the follow through would make sense. I’m being nice. Although, thank you for confirming that I’m not a hardcore rule follower. Thank you also, for providing this exercise. It’s nice to just to have a good joust with one’s vocabulary. x

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        Posted by Sabiscuit | 24/07/2015, 6:29 AM
  3. The ringlets curled in the air as he puffed again to indulge his thoughts with her memories.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Gaurav Luthra | 24/07/2015, 4:26 AM
  4. Hair for me too: β€œThe ringlets curled in the air….. ”as she frantically tried to brush them down.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Tessa | 23/07/2015, 10:48 PM
  5. She hit the mouse at last…

    and started packing for her long ago dream of travelling the world…

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Saya | 23/07/2015, 3:23 PM
  6. as Delilah cut Samson’s hair!

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by Lakshmi Srivatsan | 23/07/2015, 3:07 PM
  7. … as the flames licked his feet.

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by Victo Dolore | 23/07/2015, 2:41 PM

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