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Two phrase story #9

I provide the first phrase, you complete the thought and who knows where you might lead the train?

“A breeze parted the curtains……”


“………but the frosted glass doors were shut”


Your turn. πŸ™‚

About hbhatnagar

I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then. I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile! A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit). I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog. I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly. I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.


30 thoughts on “Two phrase story #9

  1. …and his ghost was there, smiling at her. (inspired by “Don’t fear the Reaper” by BΓ–C)

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by HeavyCloud | 14/09/2015, 6:16 PM
  2. Illuminating the room with dawn of the dusk :p


    Posted by izza ifzaal | 13/09/2015, 2:50 AM
  3. “As the body wrapped itself in the cold”

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by hiddenshadesofgrey | 11/09/2015, 9:45 PM
  4. She heard sounds in nature. “I’m home”, she said.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Amy | 10/09/2015, 8:01 PM
  5. And she screamed lustily!

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Tessa | 10/09/2015, 3:04 PM
  6. hairstyle and finally, got to see his face!

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Lakshmi Srivatsan | 10/09/2015, 12:29 PM
  7. Cold was the shadow lurking behind but the frosted glass doors were shut

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by melxdyy | 10/09/2015, 9:18 AM
  8. …revealing her naked shadow.

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by Victo Dolore | 10/09/2015, 8:49 AM
  9. A breeze parted the curtains but the walls were already torn down.

    Liked by 4 people

    Posted by Sabiscuit | 10/09/2015, 8:45 AM
  10. scattering my neatly swept piles of glass all over the room once more.

    Liked by 3 people

    Posted by ninelvlsup | 10/09/2015, 8:29 AM
  11. Thanks Amy! πŸ™‚


    Posted by hbhatnagar | 11/09/2015, 6:54 PM


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