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Two phrase story #11

I provide the first phase, you think up the second and let’s see where it goes!

“The mist was beginning to clear……… ”

My try
“……. So I lit up another.”

Your turn!

About hbhatnagar

I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then. I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile! A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit). I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog. I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly. I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.

Discussion

43 thoughts on “Two phrase story #11

  1. head is full of the darkness of ignorant …..brain sprouting with anew ideas

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by आज़ाद (pen name ) | 02/11/2015, 9:46 PM
  2. ..,when I stepped in to be blamed,

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by izza ifzaal | 05/10/2015, 3:25 AM
  3. .. until I woke up 😣

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Mon ☠ | 30/09/2015, 3:41 PM
  4. Let’s see… The mist was beginning to clear… and I had even lesser time to hide the body

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    Posted by inspiramble | 26/09/2015, 7:32 AM
  5. The mist was beginning to clear: seeing through the fog, I could barely make out a silhouette of a person.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by violindays | 25/09/2015, 8:24 AM
  6. Before she knew it, another gentle wave of fog was moving in.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Amy | 24/09/2015, 8:06 PM
  7. making the Veg sizzler appear.

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by Lakshmi Srivatsan | 24/09/2015, 7:50 PM
  8. from within and slowly could see myself stranded amidst ruins

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by uniqusatya | 24/09/2015, 4:29 PM
  9. The mist was beginning to clear, but the shadows were thick, disallowing light to penetrate into the unfathomable depths of the woods.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Soumya Mishra | 24/09/2015, 3:15 PM
  10. …but her head was still foggy and too heavy to lift off of the pillow.

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by Victo Dolore | 24/09/2015, 3:06 PM
  11. The mist was beginning to clear, time had come to hide away in the wood again before the Thing finds me…

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by HeavyCloud | 24/09/2015, 2:10 PM
  12. The mist was beginning to clear, in deference to the bashful winter sun.

    Liked by 5 people

    Posted by Sabiscuit | 24/09/2015, 12:56 PM
  13. And I ran my car into the tree.

    Liked by 4 people

    Posted by Tessa | 24/09/2015, 11:58 AM
  14. But I didn’t want to remember trauma.

    Liked by 3 people

    Posted by Udit. | 24/09/2015, 11:04 AM
  15. but the mist of emotions still lingered , leaving me foggy .

    Liked by 6 people

    Posted by priyankamoraes | 24/09/2015, 10:50 AM
  16. just enough to let me know one more step and it would have been a free fall

    Liked by 5 people

    Posted by Saya | 24/09/2015, 10:45 AM
  17. So do I think of another phrase? Or continue after you left off?

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by violindays | 24/09/2015, 10:23 AM

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