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Two phrase story #13

I give the first phrase and you think up the second, and together we make a story, or a joke, or anything you might want it be.

“His mind was not at rest……”

My attempt

“…….it traveled every moment with her on her journey.”

Your turn!


About hbhatnagar

I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then. I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile! A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit). I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog. I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly. I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.


32 thoughts on “Two phrase story #13

  1. “…with the knowledge that her voice shall haunt him for the rest of his days…or not.”

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    Posted by Julia Manuel | 13/10/2015, 10:40 PM
  2. As rest is never in the mind!

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Taruna | 12/10/2015, 12:28 AM
  3. In his little cell.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Tessa | 10/10/2015, 3:05 PM
  4. … it’s autumn, football games are on.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Amy | 08/10/2015, 8:42 PM
  5. after she passed the driving test.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Lakshmi Srivatsan | 08/10/2015, 2:06 PM
  6. …..it traveled to the second thought to everything she says and laughs.
    hahahahahaaha πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by bhavpreet | 08/10/2015, 1:44 PM
  7. His mind was not at rest, and so was his physical self.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Soumya Mishra | 08/10/2015, 10:42 AM
  8. …..it was at peace…

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Alisha | 08/10/2015, 9:48 AM
  9. …it constantly thought about stealing some food.. 😝

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Alisha | 08/10/2015, 9:48 AM
  10. “… it travelled as fast as the bullet that flew from his gun.” πŸ˜›

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Victo Dolore | 08/10/2015, 9:44 AM
  11. πŸ™‚
    Thanks for the link up!

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by hbhatnagar | 08/10/2015, 3:33 PM


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