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Two Phrase Story #15

I provide the first phrase and you complete the sentence, in your own way and we see in how many different directions one thought can be taken…..

“The distinct metallic clink told him…..”


My attempt

“The belt was coming off.”

Your turn!

About hbhatnagar

I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then. I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile! A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit). I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog. I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly. I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.


32 thoughts on “Two Phrase Story #15

  1. his final walk was becoming a cold realization.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by booguloo | 16/11/2015, 10:48 PM
  2. Wind is blowing, it just might rain…

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by Amy | 22/10/2015, 9:51 PM
  3. He had two silver dollars in his pocket. Not enough for dinner, but a drink, maybe.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by jennymarie4 | 22/10/2015, 11:03 AM
  4. They were playing horseshoes without him again.

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by Tessa | 22/10/2015, 10:20 AM
  5. The distinct metallic clink told him the vault door would now open on the country’s secret cache of gold bouillon. x

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Sabiscuit | 22/10/2015, 9:43 AM
  6. she was carrying utensils in her bag.


    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by ANooP | 22/10/2015, 9:42 AM
  7. ….It was going to be kinky . ( fur handcuffs and all !)

    Liked by 3 people

    Posted by priyankamoraes | 22/10/2015, 9:07 AM
  8. School hour is over. Its time to go home.

    Liked by 4 people

    Posted by Pooja Mehta | 22/10/2015, 9:05 AM
  9. The pin has finally dropped to break the silence. Haha.

    Liked by 4 people

    Posted by Vamagandhi | 22/10/2015, 8:43 AM
  10. “…the bullet had entered the chamber, ready to hit its mark.”

    Liked by 4 people

    Posted by Victo Dolore | 22/10/2015, 8:35 AM
  11. “Link” or “clink”?

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Victo Dolore | 22/10/2015, 8:03 AM

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