I provide the first phrase and you complete the sentence, in your own way and we see in how many different directions one thought can be taken…..
“I saw the tentative, thin, red lines I’d drawn…….”
My attempt –
“……..and holding my hand steadier, said to myself, “No more tries.””
Your turn!
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I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then.
I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile!
A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit).
I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog.
I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly.
I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.
I really like this one, Dr. Hb! 🙂
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Posted by Amy | 05/11/2015, 7:57 PMThank you Amy! I loved how people took it in so many directions! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 9:02 PMI saw the tentative, thin, red lines I’d drawn, unable to remember what I had meant to write, or why, and dizziness brought me to my knees.
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Posted by C. T. | 05/11/2015, 6:32 PMEvocative! Thanks for participating C.T.. 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 7:08 PMAnd appreciated my skills as a tattoo artist :p
Lol this was lame.,but I hope no more tries please 😂😂
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Posted by izza ifzaal | 05/11/2015, 5:36 PMThat’s a nice one and I’d like to read more please! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 7:05 PMOkay dokay 😊😊
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Posted by izza ifzaal | 05/11/2015, 8:18 PMI saw the tentative, thin, red lines I’d drawn; the wrist was my canvas, the razor, my paintbrush!
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Posted by Soumya Mishra | 05/11/2015, 12:50 PMAh! Thank you for participating Soumya!
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 1:23 PM🙂
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Posted by Soumya Mishra | 05/11/2015, 1:39 PMIn my old diary.
A great flash back of memory it was tentative because someone special came and asked why so tensed.
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Posted by Pooja Mehta | 05/11/2015, 12:44 PMNice! Thanks for participating Pooja! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 1:21 PMbefore I saw the instructions USE BLACK OR BLUE PEN ONLY.
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Posted by Lakshmi Srivatsan | 05/11/2015, 10:38 AM😀
I love your imagination! Thank you for participation Lakshmi!
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 12:00 PM…And decided I ‘d wear my scars like trophies .
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Posted by priyankamoraes | 05/11/2015, 10:30 AMThanks as ever, Pri! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 10:36 AMI need to practice cutting more.
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Posted by Tessa | 05/11/2015, 9:46 AMThanks for participating Tessa! You and I think alike on this one! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 9:58 AMCutting is self-harm for bipolar, on my mind.
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Posted by Tessa | 05/11/2015, 10:12 AMIt is self harm for depressives too
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 10:36 AMAnd wondered if imagination began or ended right there.
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Posted by Vamagandhi | 05/11/2015, 8:14 AM:-). Thanks for participating Vama!
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 9:56 AM…as the cuts welled up with blood.
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Posted by Victo Dolore | 05/11/2015, 7:45 AMSuitably gory! Thanks Victo! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 8:00 AMTrying to make you understand that the new prescription she wrote causes tremors.
A man’s face is his autobiography. A woman’s face is her work of fiction. – Oscar Wildekk
Date: Thu, 5 Nov 2015 01:24:11 +0000 To: booguloo@live.com
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Posted by booguloo | 05/11/2015, 7:19 AMNice one! Thanks for participating, Michael. 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 7:59 AM“…and I realized I was a walking contradiction: proud of the pain I caused myself but ashamed at the possibility of having him see the lines.”
I like this! So far my favorite post of yours.
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Posted by Borderline Med | 05/11/2015, 7:02 AMThank you so much for the kind words, I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
And I understand that feeling of pride and shame..
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 05/11/2015, 7:57 AM