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Two phrase story #19

I provide the first phrase and you complete the sentence, in your own way and we see in how many different directions one thought can be taken…..

“”Where are you headed?”, she asked………”

My attempt

“………and he gave her a wry smile as he walked out of the door.”

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About hbhatnagar

I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then. I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile! A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit). I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog. I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly. I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.

Discussion

29 thoughts on “Two phrase story #19

  1. Still in his quandary ,her puny empty to stop him were futile :p

    Like

    Posted by izza ifzaal | 26/11/2015, 10:56 PM
  2. He screamed again and again, as her long hand reached for his throat..

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by story teller | 26/11/2015, 8:45 PM
  3. her voice and words, thoughtfully threaded.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Lakshmi Srivatsan | 26/11/2015, 12:24 PM
  4. The state of confusion!

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Tessa | 26/11/2015, 11:13 AM
  5. Or, better yet…. “where are you headed?”, she asked. The reflection just stared back equally as clueless.

    That’s better πŸ˜‰ the overachiever in me wasn’t satisfied.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Borderline Med | 26/11/2015, 10:34 AM
  6. “Where are you headed?”, she asked. The reflection just stared back silently.

    Or…

    “Where are you headed?”, she asked the multicolor rabbit. The small paper square on her tongue proved to be opening doors rather quickly.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Borderline Med | 26/11/2015, 10:32 AM
  7. “Where are you headed?”, she asked, her eyes wide open, puzzled, as his hands slid further down under the waistband of her jeans.

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by C. T. | 26/11/2015, 10:18 AM
  8. “…with that look he knows all to well, and the slight attitude in her voice. He knew that night he was staying home to cuddle, while his friends all went out to party”.

    Liked by 1 person

    Posted by Jen | 26/11/2015, 9:49 AM
  9. …. “where ever you want me to ” , he said , as he let the attractive hitchhiker in .

    Liked by 2 people

    Posted by priyankamoraes | 26/11/2015, 9:43 AM
  10. …a coy smile playing on her lips.

    Liked by 3 people

    Posted by Victo Dolore | 26/11/2015, 9:09 AM
  11. “Where are you headed?”, she asked herself as she walked towards the car

    Liked by 3 people

    Posted by inspiramble | 26/11/2015, 8:40 AM

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