I provide the first phrase and you complete the sentence and we see in how many different directions one thought can be taken. I’d love to see how y’all treat one and the same string of words!
Todayโs phrase:
“A gentle zephyr blew……… ”
My attempt
“……..and strewed me everywhere.”
Your turn!
About hbhatnagar
I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then.
I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile!
A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit).
I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog.
I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly.
I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.
http://writinginnorthnorfolk.com/2016/02/23/who-knows-where/
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Thank you for joining in Kim! ๐
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,,,blew my brains into the back seat of the Chevrolet which is need of a vacuuming.
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Powdery grey matter! That’s a post-apocalyptic image… Thanks for joining in Ted! ๐
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I would like to add that I have really come to look forward to this. I don’t know if you want to make it challenge or not, but I would be all for it.
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That is indeed an honor for me. How do you suggest I make it a challenge?
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Just ask people to post it on their blog and to put a link that pings back to your page, as in the last one: https://hbhatnagar.wordpress.com/2016/02/11/two-phrase-story-28/
which then I would write Hbhatnagar Two Phrase Challenge #28, and then put in the link to it.
I’ll do it on my blog and you can see. ๐
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To be honest, that is what I had in mind when I started this, but I lost my energy along the way. Thank you for re-energizing me, I’ll definitely try to build it up again! ๐
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I think the most time consuming part is listing all the previous week’s entries with links. Since I have a good amount of time because of my situation, if there is something I could do to help with that, let me know.
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Thank you for the selfless offer, ET. I will try to do it and see how it goes, and I’ll be sure to keep it in mind if I need help! ๐
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A gentle zephyr blew about the dust that had once been fertile fields.
with a tip of the hat to John Steinbeck
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A haunting image indeed.. Thanks for joining in ET! ๐
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A gentle zephyr blew and sun was setting, another day was almost gone. She said to herself, “I’ll think about that tomorrow. …”
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And tomorrow maybe someone would give a damn? ๐
Thanks for that one, Amy! ๐
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I’ll think about that tomorrow — Gone With The Wind! ๐
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Yup. That’s what reminded me of the one word the director paid 25000 dollars to keep in the script. ๐
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$25000… wow! I didn’t know that.
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Apparently cuss words weren’t allowed on-screen back then.
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I had to get in another one…
“…. brushing past me like a half unremembered caress. “
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This one is so beautiful!
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Thank you for the compliment Amy! I’m waiting for yours… ๐
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bringing the salty sea air closer, the cooling waves nearer and whisking away all I could forget for now…
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A pretty task for a gentle zephyr….. Thanks for joining in Taruna! ๐
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A gentle zephyr blew and started ruffling the feathers along his unfolded wings. He found himself lifting a few inches over the grey sidewalk. “Love, what else?” he considered with a smile…
Sorry for the verbosity, but this was so inspiring! ๐
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The first sentence was image enough, the next took it that bit further …thank you for participating! ๐
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“A gentle zephyr blew…and I froze as I realized that this will probably be my last time witnessing this wonderful weather in my backyard.” (Taken from real life! Yesterday, actually!)
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Poignant! I know that feeling… Thanks for participating BM! ๐
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“… The hair into my eyes, momentarily disrupting my aim.”
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Thank you American Sniper! ๐
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and that is when i knew (that you were still there)
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Sweet thought… Thanks for joining in Radha!
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โA gentle zephyr blewโฆโฆโฆ โ raising her hair to cover her face just as I tried to kiss her lips.
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Lovely image, that! Thanks for participating Tessa!
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A gentle zephyr blew and teased the leaves of the tree, blown over in last night’s hurricane.
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Nice piece to set a mood! Thanks for participating inkbiotic! ๐
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My pleasure. Thank you for providing an interesting phrase to work with. ๐
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… And cooled off my sun-drenched skin
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Sun-drenched… That’s a lovely portmanteau word! Thanks for joining in Jenny! ๐
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Well thank you! Portmanteau.. I had to look that up! Happy to learn a new word ๐
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A gentle zephyr blew away my birthday candles.. What would be it’s wish?!
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I wonder…..
Thanks for participating Aadhirai! ๐
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Thank YOU for the phrase.. ๐
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Thank you so much for the link up ET. You’ve raised a flagging campaign! ๐
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