Jane Dougherty has this lovely poetry challenge on her blog. Every Wednesday she puts up a few words, and you are challenged to conjure up a poem using them all, and leave a link to your creation in the comments section. There’s even a painting or a picture to kickstart your imagination.
This week’s challenge (ok technically last week’s) cane be found here. There are some beautiful verses people come up with, I would urge you to go and have a look.
This week’s words were –
Aerial, profound, murmur, splintering, spark
My attempt –
“A splintering flint
A spark , a glint
A murmur from dry coke
And flames abound
In power profound
And aerial goes the smoke.”
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About hbhatnagar
I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then.
I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile!
A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit).
I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog.
I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly.
I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.
hbhatnagar 
Wish ibcould write with your style Sigh Baba
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Posted by Mon ☠ | 14/06/2016, 5:34 AMThat is such a compliment! Thanks Mon! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 14/06/2016, 5:55 AMYou have such a way with words! 🙂
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Posted by vpoetryparadise | 14/06/2016, 5:01 AMThanks vpoetryparadise, I’m glad you liked my shot verse. 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 14/06/2016, 5:55 AMWhat a lovely rhyme! 🙂
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Posted by ZenLikeFuck | 13/06/2016, 7:57 PMThank you ZLF, I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 13/06/2016, 8:46 PMLovely!
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Posted by The Anxiety Chronicles | 13/06/2016, 7:06 PMThanks Jen. 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 13/06/2016, 7:12 PMYou’re welcobe
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Posted by The Anxiety Chronicles | 13/06/2016, 7:17 PMAlmost a Limerick! Punchy rhythm 🙂
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Posted by Jane Dougherty | 13/06/2016, 6:48 PMI’m glad you approve. 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 13/06/2016, 6:56 PMI hate limericks that a) don’t rhyme b) aren’t funny. Your little poem made me smile the same way a well-crafted limerick would 🙂
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Posted by Jane Dougherty | 13/06/2016, 7:11 PMI did write a few of those way back in the day….I’ll have to dig them up one of these days! 🙂
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 13/06/2016, 7:14 PMPlease don’t post them unless they make you giggle. Smutty ones are best 🙂
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Posted by Jane Dougherty | 13/06/2016, 7:19 PMI think there was one on Pamela Anderson (Yes, I’m that old). 😀
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Posted by hbhatnagar | 13/06/2016, 8:45 PMSo’s she 🙂
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Posted by Jane Dougherty | 13/06/2016, 9:06 PM