I provide the first phrase and you complete the sentence, in your own way and we see in how many different directions one thought can be taken…..
“The jets of water from the shower-head were cold as ice…….”
My attempt
“…….but her finger impresses on his skin still burned.”
Your turn!
About hbhatnagar
I need to fill this up with much better content than I had populated it with earlier. Why I write a blog maybe? I started blogging in 2009 or thereabouts. I was a newly turned atheist and wanted to converse with others of the same persuasion. We're not exactly a big population group in India! It didn't go very well and I sort of lost interest, posting a few things now and then.
I got a lot more regular over the last few months and have been posting almost daily since February '15. There were many reasons why I gradually became more regular in posting, but one way or the other, here I am! So this blog has taken shape, being at different points in time my showcase, my comedy club, my art gallery, my book club, my therapist, my close friend, my innermost self....but always my little corner of the world. You are all welcome to visit and I hope you stay awhile!
A few points about me because I don't want to lead anyone on(and trust me this does become an issue more often than I'd care to admit).
I'm Indian, the brown-skinned variety; if race, ethnicity or skin colour is an issue, you don't have to get to know me any more than what you see on my blog.
I'm 40, so if age is an issue, please be informed accordingly.
I was a doctor, an ophthalmic surgeon for 10 years before I quit practice.
…But it didn’t stop them from steaming things up and how !
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Thanks for joining in, Pri! Steam reminded me of the car scene in Titanic..
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That was hot ! Hot hot hot. ..We were in grade nine and all of us girls drooled over Leonardo …haha ….We wore tees with his face on it ( eeeeewww).
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I was almost out of medical college..
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I can’t stop laughing …..oldie !
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Ancient, that’s closer to the truth
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The jets of water from the shower-head were cold as ice, he thought, as he rubbed on a very stubborn stain on her thigh, letting the water wash over her lifeless body.
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That’s a wonderful start to a thriller! Thank you for joining in C.T.! 🙂
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I am writing one at the moment
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🙂
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“…I screamed and jumped back and yelled out at my son to NOT flush the toilet while mommy is showering!”
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That seems like a true story! Thanks for participating Jen! 😀
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Hahaha it cooooould be!
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Wow, so many versions for the cold shower water… I like your version. 🙂
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Thanks Amy! I didn’t see so many variations on the cold shower theme coming either! 🙂
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Not too many, but I really like all you have received. 🙂
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I do too. 🙂
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The jets from the shower-head were cold as ice, numbing her throbbing pain, and reviving her heart.
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Thanks for playing Soumya! 🙂
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🙂
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and they screamed “Bura na mano Holi hai!!!”
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You have to go where no one else did! Thank you for joining in, Lakshmi! 🙂
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🙂
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“…piercing his heart like a knife, causing his breath to catch for a moment before he reached for the bottle of shampoo.”
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Pierced heart and he was thinking of shampoo…..could he BE more metrosexual? 😀
Thanks For joining in Victo!
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I soon decimated to a petty pilorected porcupine.
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pretty picture painted, praiseful participation! 😀
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…so he stayed there like on every other morning he could remember of, chilling in the ritual of waiting for warm water to complete its route from the hot water tank to his skin.
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He should have spent that time fruitfully, brushing his teeth maybe? 😀
Thanks for joining in!
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I shivered, jumped back, debated whether to turn on the heater but decided to brave it and took the plunge into goosebumps and more shivers and shudders and a quick shower. Invigorating … but maybe warm water cascading down may have been better 🙂 except the chills again when you step out.
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And that’s how you caught that pesky cold! 😀
Thanks for participating, Rambling Rose!
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I squealed, slapped him heartily and then proceed to stick my tongue down his throat.
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Thanks for playing Tessa!
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“…so I jumped back in horror with skin like chicken legs. Who would take a cold shower in this ungodly weather? ” (Reflecting on the cold I went through today and which made me panic about possibly having mild frostbite…hypochondriac med student here)
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Thanks for playing and I don’t know any med student who didn’t turn hypochondriac once in his/her career! 🙂
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